TSKD 228 Released

Here you go.

My phrasing in this one seems a bit off. I’m not sure if it’s because my senses are off, or if it’s because everything’s actually awkwardly phrased. Either way, I feel like its probably because I read a bit too much Japanese and not enough English as of late.

Maybe getting Aokana on the switch wasn’t too good of an idea after all…

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Next: The Fabled Black Lightning Princess

TSKD 230: Back to Barbra

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4 thoughts on “TSKD 228 Released

  1. Well I don’t see anything wrong in regards to the phrasing but I guess that’s what you get for operating in multiple languages

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  2. It was fine, the only part that was off was this:

    My Accelerated Thought, Parallel Processing, and Sorcerer skills made whatever my Kanna Kamui was able to cause twice as much destruction as her’s.

    The end would be better as:
    made whatever my Kanna Kamui was able to cause twice as destructive as her’s.

    Or maybe:
    made my Kanna Kamui able to cause twice as much destruction as her’s.

    And thanks for the translations, I really enjoy being able to read this.

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