So the author changed up his writing style this chapter. Seeing it made me think to myself, “Hey, I might as well try a bit harder,” so I did.
In other words, this chapter is much more English-like than anything else I’ve posted on this website to date. Supposedly higher quality as well, but I don’t have an editor, soooo I’m not actually confident in that statement.
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Yup, it does seems that the story became more fluid and the atmosphere was really wicked. Good job
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